We were wrapping up presents for Richards birthday. In my brothers room. Oh the mess. We had finished wraping up the presents. Lauren said time to clean up. 'No' I screamed ' no no no I'm not cleaning up no way'. I ran out the door and slam crash 'ouch' I moaned. I had tripped on my brothers PlayStation bag. 'you clumsy brat' Lauren called me. I said 'I'm still not cleaning up' I raced down the hall at the speed of lightning. Well not really but it seamed like it. I jumped on my mum. 'Hide me' She didn't hear me so I had to hide myself. Which was very hard my bottom was sticking up in the air. 'Molly I see you' Lauren murmured. 'But I don't want to clean up no' 'Yes' Lauren said. So I cleaned up I was dragging myself around the room picking up bits of rubbish and putting it in the bin over and over again. Do you know how boring cleaning up can be sometimes?. I started to sing 'no Molly its no time to play'. 'I was just trying to make it more interesting' I said. We had finished tidying up. 'Finally Finally Finally' I was like a stuck record. Then I had realised that there were only 6 bits of rubbish, some sellotape and some scissors. When we had finished I said 'lets play hide and go seek bet you cant find me' I raced out the door Crash bang 'ouch' I fell over a piece of wrapping paper. 'you really are clumsy ' Said Lauren ' I know'.
By molly
Monday, March 23, 2009
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Ha! Very funny :) I like your use of similes and metaphors!
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